Showing posts with label creative writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label creative writing. Show all posts

Tuesday, November 10, 2009

The tree house


This was a creative writing test given to us. I had written this short story in the class.

During our school vacations each year we would make our pilgrimage to Dehradoon, my grandparent’s home. Preparations would start days before, what to take along, whom to ask to come over and house sit, tend to our kitchen garden etc etc.
The train journey would be very hot and excruciatingly long.
“When will we reach there?” we would ask every 10 minutes.
“Wake up tomorrow morning and we will be there”, mother would reply.
After endless comics, getting down at stations to brush our teeth, wash our hands, fights with my brother and disciplining gazes from my father, we would finally reach the beautiful Doon valley. Somebody would be there at the station to take over the responsibility of looking after us. Arriving home was the next important thing for me.
Initially everybody thought I loved my grandmother a lot. Well, yes, I did and still do, but it was the mango orchards which were calling me. I loved those big shady mango trees. I was so content sitting on the branches. I wished if some kind of house could be built on the tree so I could even sleep there at night.
Every morning for the next two months I would be up before everyone else, find a comic book to read and perch on the highest branch, read  and reread it till I knew it by heart. Then, go down and get some more books. My family fortunately did not interrupt me during those escapades. Food and milk would be regularly sent up for me. I guess they were also happy to have me out of the way, one kid less to humour! I saw squirrels eating things, birds flying around with twigs to build their nests, pale eggs in a nest, worms wriggling their way up the tree, ants swaying with loads way more than they weigh. Everybody around me was busy, too busy to notice me.
As the vacations came to an end, I would be in tears not ready to leave my paradise so soon.
“We will come again next year.” Mummy would console.
“We will plant some mango trees at Puri so we don’t have to make this expensive trip every year.” Papa would laugh.
“Why don’t we pack some mango trees for you?” Grandfather would comment.
“Please let me live here. There are schools in Dehradoon too.”  I would cry.
The scene would be similar to an Indian bride crying for her parents during her vidai. It was heart breaking for me, and a matter of few laughs for everyone else.
Then during the last year of schooling, I saw the mango trees being cut down. My grandparents had sold the orchard. One by one they were all killed, the mango trees, the pale eggs, the birds with twigs, the ants with heavy loads, the wriggling worms, everyone.
I no longer wish to go there.  I often visit the orchard in my memories, sit on the highest branch and eat the ghee-chini- roti (chappatis rolled with sugar and ghee) that used to be my food during those summers.

Awakening

This was the first short story I had written long back and for my creative writing class I had modified a bit to fit the word length.

The door creaked again as the nurse walked in carrying the baby. Sneha clenched her fists to stop herself from yelling. “She was very hungry” said the nurse as she laid the child down beside Sneha. “Mamma is right here so you need not to cry again” she said in babyonese as she smiled and opened the door. The door creaked again.

There was a monologue in the background. Her mother-in -law was elaborating her pains of mother hood to ma. “It’s so convenient these days, we just had a nurse and she too even left soon after the delivery as if there was nothing for her to do after it.” The shrill of her voice was making Sneha edgy.

Her father sat quietly in the waiting area and went through all the newspapers provided by the nursing home. The door screeched again. “How are the mother and baby today?” It was the doctor this time. The nasal tone of the doctor was irritating. Strange Sneha had never realised that her doctor had a nasal tone.
Soon everyone was in the nursing home, with gifts for the baby. Sneha wanted to sleep but every time she would try to sleep the door would squeak again. She wanted to hold the baby and did not want anybody else to pick up Chidiya. But no one would listen. Chidiya too did not like being disturbed, she cried every time. The door creaked, “Lunch time” The food was all bland, “no salt for you” ma said, “Have some dalia or halwa instead”. Tired Sneha now started crying and shouting. Her father came in and sat on the foot of the bed and asked, “Is she sleeping?” Unable to eat, sleep, or rest Sneha could not take it anymore. “You people have never taken any care of me. You just got me married and then forgot about me. I do not want anyone of you here”. Mother-in-law hurried out saying, “My sister has come, and I have to bring her up here. Will be back in a minute.” The door squealed. Ma took the milk pot and went out to get more milk. “Screech”, said the door. Sneha was livid, “how dare they run away like this? Can’t they stand up to the truth?” All this shouting had woken up chidiya; she opened her blue eyes and started wailing. That was the last straw, Sneha turned to her father, tears running down her cheeks, “When will I get some rest?” Her father gently picked up the baby, rocked her back to sleep, put her in her crib, and then turned to Sneha and said, “I have four kids. I will inform you the day I get some rest.”

Ashamed Sneha went to sleep.